On 12/6/17 my group and I met up to begin brainstorming about our opening. We came up with a basic sequence of events and then began writing our script. As I typed it out, Jane, Josh, Trey, and I all put together our creative ideas and this was the outcome...
11. Ext. Bank – mid day
Austin and
Steven run around the corner with duffle bags to be picked up in Mercedes s550.
Trey: (yelling) Lets
go! Lets go! Lets go!
Tyler: (worried) I’m
freaking out! We’re going to get caught.
Trey: Don’t worry we’re fine.
They speed
to a parking garage to change and switch cars.
Cut
to: Car meet
22. Ext. Car Meet – mid day
They pull
up to the car meet
Trey: You said come back when I
have enough to risk.
Josh: You think this is some sort
of joke? Even if you had the funds there’s no way you could beat me in a
quarter mile.
Trey:(confident) I got a hunnid racks I’ll win.
Josh: Bet it’s on
Don pulls out a matching duffle bag and drops it on the ground. They get
into their cars and the race begins. Austin wins. The cars pull back up to the main
meet and get out. Don pulls out a gun and cocks it and aims it at Austin.
Everyone at the meet swarms Don and takes the gun from him.
Random car person:(screams) WOAH!
WOAH! WOAH! NOT COOL.
The
guy then takes his keys and hands it to Austin.
Brittney: What’s your name again?
The girls walk over to Austin and
he places his arms around them.
Trey: Austin. Austin Jones
Immediately squad cars pull up with
sirens and lights
Cop: Are you Austin jones?
Trey: Yes?
Cop: Place your hands behind your back
you are under arrest.
Cop reads Miranda Rights while he
throws Austin into the back of the car.
Cut to: Jail
Austin
walks out of jail.
His
phone rings saying unknown. He answers.
Unknown caller: There’s a letter placed in the back pocket of your pants. It contains all of the men that set you up. You decide what
to do.
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